Monday, September 20, 2010
Today class started with us reading in our book. We had an exercise where we took our freewriting assignment from last class and wrote a draft for a more formal essay.I shared my draft with the class. My draft was about why people do drugs and how it affects our body. After sharing my draft with the class we went back to reading the book. The book showed us different ways to help us when we are revising our essays. The acronym is CLUESS. The guide is: Coherence, Language, Unity, Emphasis, support, and sentences. See you guys on our moddle sesh.
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Just say no to drugs. Word up yo!
ReplyDeleteToday was a fun class. Almost everyone chose the same topic to write about. I guess it is a common subject to write about.
ReplyDelete@king.rios That is easier said than done for a few.