September 13, 2010

Today were in the computer lab again and surprisingly it's not hot. We went over the Writing Process Worksheet Stage Two today. We did two exercises that helped us distinguish the difference between an effective and an ineffective sentence. For the first exercise we had to underline an determine the subject and focus of a sentence, and we had to indicate whether it is effective or ineffective. For the other exercise we were given parts of a sentence and we had to fill in words to make it an effective sentence. After that, we shared our answers with everyone and we were given the green light to start blogging.